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the trouble with girlfriends

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undone



Joined: 30 Mar 2005
Posts: 152
 		the trouble with girlfriends

 such sweet girls, in the meadow
where I brushed
her skin
with petals,

where she let go
of my hand
and left me
in the lengthening shadows,

in the dampening
woods, inhaling
the fragrances
of succulents

sweating in the shade,
no bees hum, what mean girls,
mud-dauber wasps,
brutal with

self-insistence,
sting and sting
and cannot die,
it takes a while to grow up,

to not care what one's called
as long as it's your voice calling,
tonguing
into my ear, the sigh,

I'll call you
when they're sleeping,
yes, i know,
me too, tonight
Post Wed Apr 06, 2005 7:05 pm 
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Linda Bray



Joined: 22 Aug 2004
Posts: 4052

Undone,
You have a great talent!! Have you ever submitted any of your work. You could be published hun. I hope you are well and good. Take good care.
Peace,
Linda
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Post Mon Apr 18, 2005 5:39 pm 
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undone



Joined: 30 Mar 2005
Posts: 152

Linda,

Thanks so much, esp since i admire your poems too, sorry to be late in replying, have been in something of a swamp. Take care,

undone
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Post Tue Apr 26, 2005 10:42 am 
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Mairi bheag



Joined: 04 Mar 2005
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I would just like to echo my friend Linda's comments Smile

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Elbereth



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Insisting that you follow Linda's advice, Elbereth
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Post Sun May 01, 2005 12:48 pm 
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Mairi bheag



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Motion carried nem con.
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smart_cookie



Joined: 12 Aug 2006
Posts: 2310
Location: USA

oo, I love tossing my shovel over the wrought iron fence at the poetry graveyard, then clambering over it myself to find buried gems like this one.

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