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Breath

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Justine



Joined: 20 Mar 2004
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Location: Liverpool 		Breath

 whispers of lovers

leave images in water

just condensation



© Justine Tennant 2003
Post Sat Mar 20, 2004 11:35 pm 
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melons
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This is a lovely 5, 7, 5 haiku. I am impressed.

Evokes images of steamy loving.... (well to me anyway Wink )

Very Happy
Post Sat Mar 20, 2004 11:48 pm 
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Justine



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well, it was inspired by steamy windows, I have to admit Very Happy
Post Sat Mar 20, 2004 11:54 pm 
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melons
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Exactly !! lol
Post Sat Mar 20, 2004 11:58 pm 
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Tigger
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Oi you two, I am obviously not fast enough here I keep missing all the fun...must be cos its getting too steamy here lol Wink
Post Sat Mar 20, 2004 11:59 pm 
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melons
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well.......my screen hasn't got any condensation on it...yet!!!

Laughing
Post Sun Mar 21, 2004 12:00 am 
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Justine



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perhaps you should get a little closer then Wink
Post Sun Mar 21, 2004 12:03 am 
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melons
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Why...are you breathing on it from the other side?

Wink
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Tullia_1976



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It made me think of the steamy love scene in Titanic. Eventhough I wasn't crazy about the movie, I really like your Haiku. Thanks for sharing. ~Tullia
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