no one listens
__ no one hears
_____ silence bounds this night
come listen!
___________ for I am no more _______________
Sat Jul 02, 2005 8:42 am
DanceofSorrows
Joined: 29 Aug 2004
Posts: 2837
(((mel)))
Excellent, a really raw and true spilling and very understood in different depths, if only by emotion alone. I am glad to see you writing more, I really am. We all affect and inspire one another when we just let it go...
Hugs and kisses
Dance~
Sat Jul 02, 2005 7:29 pm
melons Site Admin
Joined: 06 Feb 2004
Posts: 2371
(((((Dance)))))) xx this was my first go at 'slamming,' and it really helps by letting the emotions go. Yes, we do all inspire each other and we also learn from each other *smiling.* Guess you could tell I was feeling a little blue when I wrote this, huh? lol
Love and kisses,
Mel xox
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Sat Jul 02, 2005 10:13 pm
Linda Bray
Joined: 22 Aug 2004
Posts: 4052
Mel,
Well fancy meeting you here...wonderful write hun!! Scooting over so Mel can have a seat.
Huggles,
Linda _________________ a poets heart is never empty....
Linda Bray
Sun Jul 03, 2005 5:32 am
LoCe
Joined: 02 Jun 2005
Posts: 283
Mel, that was just amazing. I loved the flow, and the truth. (((((mel))))) great write!
Sun Jul 03, 2005 6:14 pm
wyldhart
Joined: 02 Dec 2004
Posts: 1216
fabulous...for me..it was like looking in a mirror...
awesome write, babe
tender hugs and kisses
wyld _________________ "wyld in the darkest places of your mind"
Tue Jul 05, 2005 11:41 pm
melons Site Admin
Joined: 06 Feb 2004
Posts: 2371
...looking right back atcha *smiling*... glad you liked it babes....
luv'n'hugs
Mel xox
Wed Jul 06, 2005 9:52 pm
realwoman
Joined: 05 Dec 2005
Posts: 1040
Location: under our tree in Africa
Eiregirl _________________ All poems and stories posted by Eiregirl are
Copyright 2005 - 2008 Aoibhegréine
These literary works are my property under copyright. If you wish to use my work for any purpose please ASK FIRST.
Wed Mar 28, 2007 5:15 pm
melons Site Admin
Joined: 06 Feb 2004
Posts: 2371
((((((((real)))))))))
Yes, it is raw for me and heaped with emotion, though not many know the reason, only a handful. Expect me to resurrect this poem again on 2nd July, the date has a huge meaning for me, as you know.
Thanks for the hugs and the big bunch of roses.
My love to you and Hawn, always.
Mel xx
Fri Mar 30, 2007 7:17 pm
melons Site Admin
Joined: 06 Feb 2004
Posts: 2371
(((((((((((4th))))))))))
quote:Originally posted by fortheloveofagood...:
thanks for excavating this real
quote:Originally posted by Mdm Prez:
(((((((((((((((((((( Mel ))))))))))))))))
Cat
Thank you for the hug baby.
You are the only one who knows the exact intricacies weaved into this slam, from my perspective and that of the loved one I lost.
I love you Cat,
Your Mel xoxoxox
Fri Mar 30, 2007 7:21 pm
Mdm Prez
Joined: 19 May 2005
Posts: 1536
Location: U.S. of A.
Mel
I brought this forward for you, for tomorrow.
(Picture me holding you honey, my cheek softly against yours, my one arm around your waist, the other hand gently rubbing your back. I lean back to look in your eyes and I know what they say. I kiss your eyes and whisper in your ear that I love you more than you could know.)
((((((((((((((((((((((( My Mel ))))))))))))))))))))))))
You are precious to me Sweetheart.
Cat _________________ If you're not getting the answers you want,
you're not asking the right questions.
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