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wonderwoman

Joined: 31 Mar 2006
Posts: 2

I cannot see

I am sitting here thinking of you
I can see those deep soulful eyes filled with both wonder and fear
I can see those lips that once passionately touched mine
I can feel you soft skin that once pressed against me
I can see everything about you but your heart
Your heart I cannot see because you wont let anyone in not even yourself
I can see the way we would play and joke around like we were twelve
I can see how you lovingly tried to reach out to my kids
I can see you struggling to get out of that hole you made
But I cannot see your heart
I can see your compassion when you help people
I can see your depth when you find beauty in obscure things
I can see the passion of life when you see the sunset or show me the stars
But I still cannot see into your heart
I can see the love in your eyes when you talk about your father
I can see that mischievous grin when you talk about things you did as a kid
But ass much as I desperately want to no matter how hard I try I cannot and you will not let me see into your heart

Fri Mar 31, 2006 5:08 am

ghost

Joined: 06 Nov 2005
Posts: 2828
Location: MIA

what a nice write, wonder! i hope she reads this and opens her heart to you. i liked your other poem too. and maybe you should rather post in Emotional forum, lol, Free verse is somewhat of a lesser cousin if you like - no offense meant to anybody!

regards
ghost
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Tue Apr 04, 2006 2:47 pm

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