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ghost



Joined: 06 Nov 2005
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 crystal glass
the purest form
has a particular sound
when it breaks

it sounds like
shattered blood
broken dreams
the sound is empty
voiceless
yet it speaks
of endless aches

crystal glass
the purest form
when it breaks
has a particular sound
too familiar to bear
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Post Wed Apr 05, 2006 8:48 pm 
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dRED1



Joined: 22 Feb 2006
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Location: Lost in the sea of souls .... South Pacific

Ghosty,

I feel this one... sighs too familiar... great write thanks so much for sharing it with us.

Hugs,
Gel
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Post Wed Apr 05, 2006 8:58 pm 
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animaanna



Joined: 22 Aug 2005
Posts: 323
Location: Portland, OR

Yeah, it does indeed ghostie...

As I fall away from the sound of broken crystal dreams
I dance for the moon and the stars while milky tears swirl
And surround me, in the comfort of night

J
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Post Wed Apr 05, 2006 9:10 pm 
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realwoman



Joined: 05 Dec 2005
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Location: under our tree in Africa 		Re: broken
quote:
Originally posted by ghost:

it sounds like
shattered blood


GHOST!!!!!!

The line quoted above hit me right in the gut! You are truly amazing - and I was priviledged that you shared this with me! Even more that I could help think of a title (not that i was of any help - lol)

NEVER stop writing, I will buy you a new set of crystal glasses - heh Laughing

Hugs,
real
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Post Wed Apr 05, 2006 9:26 pm 
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ghost



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real - not often someone sees me writing a poem off the cuff like that. thanks for your friendship.

gel - thanks.

anima - what a nice reply... when are we seeing some of your work again???? thanks for stopping by.

regards
ghost
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Post Wed Apr 05, 2006 10:24 pm 
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Linda Bray



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ghost,
Givin ya a big hug. Great write....beautiful flow. Sending positive energy your way. Take good care.
Hugs,
Linda
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lemons



Joined: 12 Feb 2006
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Location: here ... with her <3

ghost,

hmm, think this poem just described how I am feeling right now ..... hoping to be able to sweep up the broken pieces soon.

very nicely written ..... I know I don't comment on all of them, but I really enjoy what you write. keep it up Smile

mel 05[/quote]
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Post Thu Apr 06, 2006 3:14 am 
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ghost



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linda - thanks!

mel05 - thanks for the comment and the encouragement.

regards
ghost
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Post Thu Apr 06, 2006 6:44 am 
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animaanna



Joined: 22 Aug 2005
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Location: Portland, OR

Ghostie - I havent written in ever so long... started a few things, but just for myself. If I ever write again, I'll be sure to let you know. Peace and love to you my friend
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Post Thu Apr 06, 2006 5:30 pm 
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ghost



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J, i can understand that - but what a waste of real talent. hope you are doing ok, my dear. keep in touch, you hear!

fond regards
ghost
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Post Thu Apr 06, 2006 6:36 pm 
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aykay



Joined: 22 Feb 2006
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Ghost,
I love the imagery in this especially the shattered blood. Makes me think of that aching moment where you know everything you love had has disintegrated right in fron of you, or to be only slighly less depressive, the moment when the shit hits the proverbial fan.
AK
Post Thu Apr 06, 2006 7:44 pm 
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ghost



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thanks for the nice comment, ak.

regards
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Post Thu Apr 06, 2006 8:10 pm 
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Eiregirl



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ghost,

very nice

Hugs,
Eiregirl Arrow
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ghost



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thanks, eire.

regards
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Post Mon Apr 10, 2006 5:37 am 
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maryj



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glass breaking does have a unique sound
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