Sometimes there is no mark to be on or off. Some times you just got to purge and spill. Thanks for reminding me with this piece. _________________ Listen for heart's song.
Mon Jun 19, 2006 12:54 pm
melons Site Admin
Joined: 06 Feb 2004
Posts: 2371
From one woman who rambles to another
I loved this Dance....not sure I have the same meaning in my head when i read it as you had when you wrote it, I like it all the same, it's deep and evocative.
luv'n'hugs
Mel xox
Mon Jun 19, 2006 10:47 pm
DanceofSorrows
Joined: 29 Aug 2004
Posts: 2837
You know I didn't expect any response on this poem but it is wonderful to get it. To me the poem signified the frustration of writing what is real when going through it and yet not being able to desire sharing it as it is. Thoughts are not permanent, nor is mood...we all have the temporary ones but no one wants to be polarized by them or stuck in that stage of life (of the poem itself) it by others perceptions. That I where I am coming from and I can respect others temporary thoughts and feelings. As I say we are all in different stages. I have tried to write a consistant journey to no avail. I have tried to write poetry on a consistant sharing basis..to no avail. But one thing I do love is poetry. One of the greatest things is to read someone else's vulnerabilities that make us human and understanding as well.
Anyhow...yes in a babbling mood. Thank you both very much. It kinda makes me feel guilty I haven't read as much as I would like of other people's writings...but I will get there soon...been working so damn hard.
Dance~
Tue Jun 20, 2006 9:17 pm
ghost
Joined: 06 Nov 2005
Posts: 2828
Location: MIA
agreed with you, dance.
my biggest problem at the moment is not being able to say what i feel through my poetry... not because i can't, but because i won't.
dunno if you can understand that perspective....
good to see you around, hope the time allows for you to share more of your wonderful poetry with us.
regards
ghost _________________
MIA
Thu Jun 22, 2006 5:42 am
DanceofSorrows
Joined: 29 Aug 2004
Posts: 2837
(((ghost)))
Sure I can understand. But we can encourage another somehow. And I also want to say that I notice how much you do for others here, a kind reply to newcomers, responses to poetry, the moderation...you are a great support and deserve much in return.
Dance~
Mon Jul 03, 2006 5:04 pm
ghost
Joined: 06 Nov 2005
Posts: 2828
Location: MIA
awww dance now see, you gone and made ghost cry.
but hey, thanks for the kind words.
if it takes just one word to make a difference in someone's life, dance, i will say it.
care.
we all care about each other here, and that's what makes mels different i think.
loose thoughts. i seem to be in a losing state of mind.
hell, now i don't even make sense to myself anymore.
regards (and to YKW too).
ghost _________________
MIA
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