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brokendeserthrt

Joined: 14 Jun 2006
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while on the patio

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Sun Jun 25, 2006 6:49 am

ghost

Joined: 06 Nov 2005
Posts: 2828
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beautiful write, sdt...

umm, maybe you should just warn people that it will take time to load the poem? i nearly asked you if i was missing something here...

alternatively post as per normal?

regards
ghost

Sun Jun 25, 2006 7:16 am

shane

Joined: 11 Aug 2004
Posts: 63

(i love your poem!...) the pictures, the sights, the smell, the feel of the breeze it evokes; like watching, being, on the patio itself; on a different day, on a different time... beautiful poem you wrote. thanks.
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Wed Jul 12, 2006 7:38 am

brokendeserthrt

Joined: 14 Jun 2006
Posts: 18

quote:
Originally posted by ghost:
beautiful write, sdt...

umm, maybe you should just warn people that it will take time to load the poem? i nearly asked you if i was missing something here...

alternatively post as per normal?

regards
ghost

i'm sorry it took so long to load for you, but 90% of my work is done like this. if that's a problem for you, and it's not welcome, please let me know and i'll continue on elsewhere.

"normal" .. is not anything i strive for.

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shane, your response .. "like watching, being, on the patio itself" .... is exactly what i was hoping for.
thank you for sharing your thoughts.

~S
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Fri Jul 21, 2006 8:06 pm

ghost

Joined: 06 Nov 2005
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ouch.

ghost wants to say something, then decides against it.

you are most welcome to post however you wish, s. i was trying to get people to understand that this is not a blank post, as i first thought.

regards
ghost
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Fri Jul 21, 2006 9:07 pm

brokendeserthrt

Joined: 14 Jun 2006
Posts: 18

quote:
Originally posted by ghost:
ouch.

ghost wants to say something, then decides against it.

you are most welcome to post however you wish, s. i was trying to get people to understand that this is not a blank post, as i first thought.

regards
ghost

my comment was not intended as an ouch ...
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Fri Jul 21, 2006 11:31 pm

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