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Sunny



Joined: 18 Jun 2006
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So Hot She Burns

SO HOT SHE BURNS

She’s a dangerous woman
In an innocent disguise.
Her charm will seduce you,
But there’s flames in her eyes.
She’s got a sizzling body
Her lips are on fire.
She’ll get your temperature rising
But take you no higher.
She’ll burn down your walls
And scorch to the core.
A heart like burnt toast
But you’ll beg for more.
She’ll leave coals in your soul
As big as a boulder,
For years to come
They’ll linger and smolder.

Because she’s hot
So hot she burns
She’ll burn you once
And apologize
But it’ll happen again
There’s no telling when
Because she’s hot
So hot she burns

Reduced to smoke and ash
Unable to breath
A victim of rapture
But still refusing to leave.
There’s no escaping
Her irresistible flame,
You’ll ignore all alarms
And have just you to blame.
You’ll be burnt beyond
Your own recognition
And left on your own
In a frightful condition.
But she can’t extinguish
Her searing ways,
Every heart that she touches
Goes down in a blaze.

Because she’s hot
So hot she burns
She’ll burn you once
And apologize
But it’ll happen again
There’s no telling when
Because she’s hot
So hot she burns
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Post Thu Jul 06, 2006 7:02 pm 
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fortheloveofagood...
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this poem made me smile and reminisce ~ thanks for sharing sunny.

Kx
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Post Fri Jul 07, 2006 8:05 am 
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KX,
So glad I could share a smile. Laughing I guess we've all known one of these "hot" women at some point in our life.
Sunny
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Post Fri Jul 07, 2006 10:52 am 
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cmari



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hey....wait a minute......yeah...definately...I've met her Smile

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Avant-garde



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Sunny,

I see yu are quit a oet when yo wanna be....I liked this.
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Post Fri Sep 22, 2006 8:06 am 
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Sunny



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cmari,
Yeah, this one really seems to make her rounds, huh? Wink

Sunny Cool
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Post Sat Sep 23, 2006 12:12 am 
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cmari



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I'm tellin ya! hehe..

Post Sat Sep 23, 2006 10:17 pm 
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Sunny



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Baby,
Thanks. I enjoyed writing this one as well. It was a cathartic, healing process. Sending hugs and hoping the rest of your weekend is healing as well. Exclamation

Sunny Cool
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Post Sun Sep 24, 2006 2:47 pm 
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almostthere



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Wow, I know this one too! Yes, she can leave one in a terrible state.

Thank you.

almostthere
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Post Mon Sep 25, 2006 3:24 pm 
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Sunny



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Laughing Laughing Laughing

Almost,
Yes this one seems to be lke some sort of epidemic Twisted Evil
Thanks for taking the time to read and respond. Have a wonderful day Exclamation .

Sunny Cool
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Post Mon Sep 25, 2006 6:52 pm 
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Sunny,
This my friend left me speechless.
How come you always have a way of doing that?!?
Take care.
~Cheers, Jack
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Post Tue Sep 26, 2006 8:06 am 
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Sunny



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(((((Jack)))))
I just call 'em like I see 'em.... Wink
Tace care, my firend Exclamation

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Post Tue Sep 26, 2006 12:43 pm 
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Sunny,

I've met her... lol.
This was wonderfully done!
(((((Sunny)))))

Hugs,
Xalia
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Post Tue Sep 26, 2006 1:25 pm 
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Sunny



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quote:
Originally posted by Xalia1:
Sunny,

I've met her... lol.
This was wonderfully done!
(((((Sunny)))))

Hugs,
Xalia

Laughing Laughing Laughing
Xalia,
I'm beginning to think she's sunk her hooks into every woman on this board at one time or another...

Glad you enjoyed.

Sending many hugs and wishes for a peaceful healing day

((((Xalia))))


Sunny Cool
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Post Tue Sep 26, 2006 1:56 pm 
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Sunny



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Hey gang,
Sorry for digging this one out of mothballs, but I did it for a friend... hope you don't mind.

Sunny
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Post Mon Nov 13, 2006 3:52 am 
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