Joined: 17 Dec 2005
Posts: 2216
Location: loves land of plenty
Sometimes
Front line approaches
Scare me
And background noises
Hinder me
I am but a
Little girl
Lost in a
Big World
So she speaks to herself
And she consoles in her
Own Way
A major leap
Has to be… taken…
Humour me, it's the only time to take the
Trouble in me…
I can't stand me… honestly, truthfully …
When I can stand and lie
And I can make believe
When I can construct and weave
In an end without warning
How do I know… I am not
Making it… seem, so seamless
Empty promises; a waking dreamless
Monotony of conjectures, strewn together
This is the doubting pain I experience
When I am troubled and with her
How can I even possibly, consider
Forever
And mean it?
But …
… I can… And… I do…
Because we contain the secret
……epitome,
Of a love that is bigger than
Of you and of me…
I have to…. wait… to uncover, to unseal
What is… What is… (un)… real… _________________ -----------------------------------------------------
'don't hate your enemies, it clouds your judgement'
~peace comes from knowing only love is real~
Thu Jul 27, 2006 4:45 pm
ghost
Joined: 06 Nov 2005
Posts: 2828
Location: MIA
(((((((((((k)))))))))))))
this is beautiful.
regards
ghost _________________
MIA
Thu Jul 27, 2006 5:32 pm
Mdm Prez
Joined: 19 May 2005
Posts: 1536
Location: U.S. of A.
4
Another very smart write from you!!!!
Cat _________________ If you're not getting the answers you want,
you're not asking the right questions.
Thu Jul 27, 2006 6:43 pm
realwoman
Joined: 05 Dec 2005
Posts: 1040
Location: under our tree in Africa
Re: Sometimes
quote:Originally posted by fortheloveofagood...:
How can I even possibly, consider
Forever
And mean it?
But …
… I can… And… I do…
Because we contain the secret
……epitome,
Of a love that is bigger than
Of you and of me…
I have to…. wait… to uncover, to unseal
What is… What is… (un)… real…
OH MY WORD, K!!
You just seem to have the gift of finding the right words that speaks as if from my heart ... the secret scorcery of the true poet...
Brilliant stuff!!!
Keep them coming!
Please?
real _________________ .
.
light is to darkness as love is to fear...
Thu Jul 27, 2006 9:19 pm
fortheloveofagood... Site Admin
Joined: 17 Dec 2005
Posts: 2216
Location: loves land of plenty
Ghostie - as MB said to me, you have to be beautiful to recognise beauty, (or words to that effect...)
Cat - thank you
and
Really real - well ya know, i posted it becos i do what i'm told! LOL
Glad it resonates....
Hugs you tight,
Eiregirl _________________ All poems and stories posted by Eiregirl are
Copyright 2005 - 2008 Aoibhegréine
These literary works are my property under copyright. If you wish to use my work for any purpose please ASK FIRST.
Tue Oct 03, 2006 3:02 am
fortheloveofagood... Site Admin
Joined: 17 Dec 2005
Posts: 2216
Location: loves land of plenty
((((((((((((((baby)))))))))))))))))))
(((((((((((((((Eire)))))))))))))))))))
This mascot has pitched her tent in the countryside for a few days, but have found my way back to mels, like a beacon of light, for just a few mins. Thanks for replying. Luckily yes, I have moved on from these doubts, but that little voice can sometimes creep up on me...
quote:Originally posted by fortheloveofagood...:
((((((((((((((baby)))))))))))))))))))
(((((((((((((((Eire)))))))))))))))))))
This mascot has pitched her tent in the countryside for a few days, but have found my way back to mels, like a beacon of light, for just a few mins. Thanks for replying. Luckily yes, I have moved on from these doubts, but that little voice can sometimes creep up on me...
Peace to all, and the NCC!
Kx
ITS THE MASCOT...ITS THE MASCOT
looks at baby and points...see there she is
_________________ All poems and stories posted by Eiregirl are
Copyright 2005 - 2008 Aoibhegréine
These literary works are my property under copyright. If you wish to use my work for any purpose please ASK FIRST.
Thu Oct 05, 2006 6:17 am
Avant-garde
Joined: 20 Jul 2006
Posts: 2850
Location: NY
Yes indeed our Mascot has returned. Welcome home TheLOVE, the NCC missed you......
smiles, _________________ ~poetry is the lover ,mine artistic soul, and the keeper of my tormented mind.
Thu Oct 05, 2006 12:53 pm
fortheloveofagood... Site Admin
Joined: 17 Dec 2005
Posts: 2216
Location: loves land of plenty
'don't hate your enemies, it clouds your judgement'
~peace comes from knowing only love is real~
Sun Oct 08, 2006 8:54 am
Avant-garde
Joined: 20 Jul 2006
Posts: 2850
Location: NY
TheLove,
As I just opened your reply I was sitting here having a cup of tea as well. Nice to have you home.
smiles and sips tea, _________________ ~poetry is the lover ,mine artistic soul, and the keeper of my tormented mind.
Sun Oct 08, 2006 4:44 pm
shane
Joined: 11 Aug 2004
Posts: 63
a beautiful write! i love the many things confusing and unspoken in your lines, the determination despite uncertainty. beautful... thank you for sharing. _________________ it just is...
Mon Oct 16, 2006 2:41 am
fortheloveofagood... Site Admin
Joined: 17 Dec 2005
Posts: 2216
Location: loves land of plenty
awww shane
"the determination despite uncertainty"
, that sums up my life, and here was me thinking i was just stubborn in the face of own self-created opposition.
Glad you liked
Take Care
Kx _________________ -----------------------------------------------------
'don't hate your enemies, it clouds your judgement'
~peace comes from knowing only love is real~
Mon Oct 16, 2006 3:06 pm
LOSTANDFOUND
Joined: 25 Apr 2006
Posts: 352
Location: USA
wow
loved the way you set this up...i just loved it! _________________ LAF
Knowing something will not change your life.
Doing something will.
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