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My latest 3am existential rant

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ms.deidre



Joined: 09 Jul 2006
Posts: 52
Location: Arlington, Va
My latest 3am existential rant

Marge Piercy, do you know what to do
when there's no water connection?



Ms. Dalloway, please,
no more of your cartoon lies.
Cease the concrete feet.
Stop with the skeletal eyes.

It's nearly three am
and we've been awake
since one. You've forced reliance
on the mercy of strangers.

Is there more than dead?
The roaches still crawl over me.
From feeding on my flesh,
evolution gave them wings.

The ants see this benefit, anticipate
holy ground for their queen mesiah.
“....by the sword...” carion consumers
pray to keep flesh from rot.

Is there more than hate? Yes, but
it's all just a polite disagreement
between two gentlemen, God and Satan.
And Satan's just innovative, upwardly mobile.
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Post Thu Aug 10, 2006 8:51 am 
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Eiregirl



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deidre,

Nicely written and it says a lot

Eiregirl Arrow

Post Fri Aug 11, 2006 3:57 am 
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very cool

i enjoyed the style of this, the twists and turns it made my mind make.

kx
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Post Mon Aug 21, 2006 8:06 pm 
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ms.deidre



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Thanks ya'll. Wink

-Deidre
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