I.
breaking the surface
brave spears of beauty
frost glimmering
II.
rain puddling now
slender quivering limbs
bent with heavy buds
III.
petals are flaming
unexpected roadside show
competing with dusk
IV.
buried in leaves
overwhelmed by it all
retreating till spring _________________ The only things to regret in life, are those you never attempted.
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Wed Nov 03, 2004 9:22 am
pele
Joined: 24 Nov 2004
Posts: 14
Location: california
tullia...
i'm usually not one for haikus but...
this is fucking brilliant!!!
you definitely took it to a whole other level...
thank you for sharing...
pele
Thu Nov 25, 2004 3:26 am
Tullia_1976
Joined: 01 Nov 2004
Posts: 414
Location: Canada
Pele,
I'm glad you liked it! It has been kicking around here for awhile. I replied to everyone's work in here, and no one even read mine. lol
Them's the breaks right.
I have been meaning to move it to nature poetry. But I have been so busy reading so many good poems on here, I haven't had the time.
You should send me a pm new girl. Let me know where your poems are. I was also kinda wondering why pele? You a soccer fan chica?
I can't wait to read some of your work. We all learn when we share, and we all learn about each other, and where we can travel in our writing, when we learn from the poems and replies of others.
Just my crazy philosophy though. lol
*smooches and hugs to the newbie*
~Tullia _________________ The only things to regret in life, are those you never attempted.
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If you enjoy getting a reply from a poet,
be thoughtful and reply to that poet's work.
Don't be the one that stops the circle,
of good feelings and sharing thoughts.
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