A closeness, so intense
envelops me
(oh sweet serenity)
as we converse
and traverse
the mountain
of our love
(it grows)
and like a fountain
spills and overflows.
Together
we are one,
swaying like heather
in a warm breeze
beneath a golden sun
(a lovers dance)
as You romance
me
(loves tease)
my dream
now an eternity
of loving
to the extreme
with You.
You have my heart Cat,
Your Mel xoxoxox
Thu Jul 20, 2006 10:59 pm
Mdm Prez
Joined: 19 May 2005
Posts: 1536
Location: U.S. of A.
Mel
I feel a response to this by me should be whispered in your ear, nothing catchy or loud. Just *whispering softly to you... this is beautiful, thank you, and I love you very deeply. Anything more, I've said to you privately. I just want the quietness to stay here.
You have my heart,
Cat _________________ If you're not getting the answers you want,
you're not asking the right questions.
Fri Jul 21, 2006 1:34 am
soulilluminations
Joined: 23 Jul 2006
Posts: 25
I feel guilty for interupting...but I just had to say...this is wonderfully written poem...Wishing the two of you the best in life and love...
Sun Jul 23, 2006 7:06 pm
DarkChyldesKiss Site Admin
Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Posts: 3381
Location: Inner Sanctum
quote:Originally posted by Mdm Prez:
I feel a response to this by me should be whispered in your ear, nothing catchy or loud. Just *whispering softly to you... this is beautiful, thank you, and I love you very deeply. Anything more, I've said to you privately. I just want the quietness to stay here.
You have my heart,
Cat
I think I went offline around the time you posted your comment baby, and as you know i wasn't around here for quite a while. I'm still catching up (you know how slow I can be lol).
As for whispering in my ear.....mmmmhhhhmmmm...that sounds wonderful, I like the quiet too.....it gives me time to reflect on everything you've said to me privately
I'll look after your heart baby, you know I will.
Te amo,
Your Mel xxx
Mon Oct 23, 2006 10:00 pm
melons Site Admin
Joined: 06 Feb 2004
Posts: 2371
Soul
quote:Originally posted by soulilluminations:
I feel guilty for interupting...but I just had to say...this is wonderfully written poem...Wishing the two of you the best in life and love...
Hi Soul
like I said to Cat above, I wasn't online for a long time and am catching up. I've not seen you around the site before, so welcome to Melswebs.
Thank you so much for your kind wishes for Cat and I. Glad you liked my poem,
hugs,
Mel
Mon Oct 23, 2006 10:01 pm
melons Site Admin
Joined: 06 Feb 2004
Posts: 2371
Jan
quote:Originally posted by DarkChyldesKiss:
mel,
Another beautiful piece!
Hugs
Jan
Thanks hun, I'm glad you liked it, I value your opinion
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