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brokendeserthrt

Joined: 14 Jun 2006
Posts: 18

brittle shame

brittle shame

i could have shut away
the token memories
.. maple leafs
dried and pressed
between the pages of
pablo neruda's verses
yet, here on my desk
they're scattered
a tangible force
taking me to where you
were when you found them
geography is a cruel
mistress - yet tonight, she was stripped
allowing me to stand
naked before you

... second guessing; i turn in shame

©sdt'06
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Tue Oct 24, 2006 3:56 am

Eiregirl

Joined: 21 Jul 2005
Posts: 10230
Location: Chasing a pink bunny

broken,

That is a lovely and sweet write with just the right amount of sadness.

Eiregirl

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Tue Oct 24, 2006 4:56 am

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