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The Creature {F}

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butchito



Joined: 21 Oct 2006
Posts: 16
Location: Hot Springs,AR.USA 		The Creature {F}

 As I sit inside my room,
outside theres a bird.
Watching me,
I listen to the soft sound,
of her song....
A long sad song...

I watch the bird,
free from her cage.
Able to sing,
and free to fly.

Standing near my window,
looking through seeing me.
Not knowing The Creature,
inside is...

The bird cries,
tilting her head...
Singing a song of,
sadness for me.
I remain in my cage.
Unable to be set free.
Happiness set right in side me...
Fear laying just beneath
my skin....
Emotions running,
around in my soul...
Invading my mind,
capturing my heart.

A bird crying,
watching the caged animal !
A bird crying for,
my release
my freedom.
I am a caged animal,
watching a bird cry for me.

Last edited by butchito on Fri Nov 03, 2006 11:34 pm; edited 1 time in total
Post Tue Oct 24, 2006 12:00 am 
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Eiregirl



Joined: 21 Jul 2005
Posts: 10230
Location: Chasing a pink bunny

butchito...

That was a very interesting write.

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Mairi bheag



Joined: 04 Mar 2005
Posts: 5094
Location: Scotland

Nice idea! Free verse can be very, very effective in short lines like that.

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