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When The Walls Come Closin' In

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rachelle



Joined: 20 Oct 2006
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Location: california 		When The Walls Come Closin' In

 I can’t really tell you why
And I never know just when
Don’t ever see it comin’
When the walls come closin’ in

I may be walkin’ in the street
Or sittin’ in a chair
Might start from down below
Or come from way up there

Don’t seem to have a beginning
But I know right where it’ll end
Even the clouds are crowdin’ me
When the walls come closin’ in

I met her through her mother
Thought she’d be my friend
We were gonna ride off in the sunset
Then the walls came closin’ in

Preacher warned of a firey death
Gotta stop this life I’m livin’
Says I got to pray to God
And all will be forgiven

Don’t know what I’m doin’ wrong
Or why he’d call it sin
I wonder if it’s the hand of God
When the walls come closin’ in

There's got to be a beginning
For something to have an end
That middle part’s called livin’
But then the walls come closin’ in
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hopelessRomantic



Joined: 24 Nov 2006
Posts: 16
Location: Long Beach, CA

i like it, it's relateable. Keep it up.
Post Fri Nov 24, 2006 3:23 am 
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combatbaby



Joined: 11 Nov 2006
Posts: 376
Location: Ontario

Excellant write Rachelle, there's a great sense of rythem to it.
*tips hat to Rachelle*
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Post Fri Nov 24, 2006 4:51 am 
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rachelle



Joined: 20 Oct 2006
Posts: 391
Location: california

Thanks hopeful and combat---I think this is more of a song then a poem and i should've posted it as such------rachelle
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almostthere



Joined: 15 Sep 2006
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Location: USA

I really liked this wrtie. Thank you.
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Post Fri Nov 24, 2006 11:27 am 
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rachelle



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Location: california

Thanks again Almost--------rachelle
Post Fri Nov 24, 2006 4:33 pm 
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Eiregirl



Joined: 21 Jul 2005
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Location: Chasing a pink bunny

Rachelle,

Wonderful write that can make a person think.

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Post Sun Nov 26, 2006 6:44 am 
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Sunny



Joined: 18 Jun 2006
Posts: 1571
Location: Massachusetts

Rachelle,
Another fabulous write Exclamation

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Post Sun Nov 26, 2006 8:06 am 
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Fernanda.F.Rocha



Joined: 17 Aug 2006
Posts: 1392
Location: Portugal

Excellent writing Exclamation Smile
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Post Sun Nov 26, 2006 12:33 pm 
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DamagedGoods



Joined: 13 May 2006
Posts: 550

Rachelle,

Reminds me of the mormons who told me that they don't ban gay and lesbians from their church but they will try and help cure them... I told them I had no wish to be cured, the disease is wayyyy too much fun!! Another great thought provoking write Rachelle!

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Post Sun Nov 26, 2006 12:46 pm 
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rachelle



Joined: 20 Oct 2006
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Location: california

E, sunny, lady----thanks all-rachelle
Post Sun Nov 26, 2006 7:39 pm 
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rachelle



Joined: 20 Oct 2006
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Location: california

DG--I am also written down somewhere in the book of mormon--LOL--We are a couple of OUTlaws---Oh god now I'm going to have to write a little tune about OUTlaws--damn woman see what you do to me----rachelle
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