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BdeCaunteton
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... _________________ “It would be a pity of lesbians and gay men retreated into the same kind of cultural separatism. " - Jeanette Winterson
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MysteryGirl
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Joined: 02 Jun 2007
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Fascinating beginning B, very descriptive. Im intrigued and looking forward to more.
HugZ, MG _________________ Be yourself.............everybody else is taken!
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BdeCaunteton
Joined: 07 Jan 2007
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Location: Iowa City, IA |
... _________________ “It would be a pity of lesbians and gay men retreated into the same kind of cultural separatism. " - Jeanette Winterson
www[dot]bdecauntetonspoetry[dot]webs[dot]com
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Allison
Joined: 12 Oct 2005
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Very good beginning B. I felt like I could step riht into the scene with the way you described it. I am very intrigued by where you will take us in this story. Good opening cacth. It shows that you have put a lot of thought into the beginning. Please continue.
Alli _________________ Alli
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BdeCaunteton
Joined: 07 Jan 2007
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Location: Iowa City, IA |
... _________________ “It would be a pity of lesbians and gay men retreated into the same kind of cultural separatism. " - Jeanette Winterson
www[dot]bdecauntetonspoetry[dot]webs[dot]com
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Allison
Joined: 12 Oct 2005
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Most welcome B now add more, I know you have it LOL. Great job!
Alli _________________ Alli
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Tue Jan 19, 2010 10:36 pm |
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april22
Joined: 26 Dec 2009
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i like it b. is like watching a movie in my head. _________________ _April
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BdeCaunteton
Joined: 07 Jan 2007
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Location: Iowa City, IA |
... _________________ “It would be a pity of lesbians and gay men retreated into the same kind of cultural separatism. " - Jeanette Winterson
www[dot]bdecauntetonspoetry[dot]webs[dot]com
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